Thursday, April 30, 2015

letter from war

Dear mum
We have been here for so many months now.
All I can see is mud,the color brown,rats and bugs.
It is so loud all I can haire is boom! boom! boom!
My trench is very uncomfortable.
It is wet,hard and the floor keeps vibrating.
I miss you so so so much!
Hannah
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxx Ooooooooooooooo

    

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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 30, 2015 at 6:52 PM

    i like that letter it is very loving

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  2. AnonymousApril 30, 2015 at 6:55 PM

    Hannah I like your poem but I want you to change the coulur

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  3. AnonymousApril 30, 2015 at 6:55 PM

    Hannah I like your poem but I want you to change the coulur

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  4. AnonymousApril 30, 2015 at 6:55 PM

    Hannah I like your poem but I want you to change the coulur

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  5. AnonymousApril 30, 2015 at 6:55 PM

    I really like the way you used you full stops and capital letters well. You really described how you felt to me. You put the wrong spelling for hear. Not Haire

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    1. AnonymousApril 30, 2015 at 6:58 PM

      thank you joel

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    2. AnonymousApril 30, 2015 at 7:03 PM

      i like the use of ,. those so good job :0

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